ROUGH CUT FEEDBACK

We showed the rough cut on the big screen in our lesson. Our feedback is all positive, with some extra pointers which can help with our editing.

After watching it on the big screen we have noticed a few shots which are slightly out of sink, and we've also realized there are a few shakes in the filming which we will have to remove.

We still have a few extra things to film. We are planning on filming a few more scenery shots which we can use in the sequence in the instrumental parts. We are also going to film the girl on a bike, riding along to the song whilst singing. We are going to do this on Jesus Green in Cambridge, using Rowena's bike.

We are also going to add in effects such as dissolves, fades, and desaturated colours. We are also trying to use a cartoon effect, where we are going to shave stars floating around our singer as she sings, with other scenes with the singer in a cartoon world. She also is going to act like she is touching the stars etc.

We are also thinking about using the grand piano in some of our scenes, but we are having problems with booking the piano at an appropriate time.